The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.
Describe the information shown to a university/college lecturer.
The bar graph illustrates, the average working hours of eight different professionals. While, pie chart depicts, the percentage of disease related to work stress of each occupants.
Overall, working hours of business man was in highest position among the given workers. In fact, the amount of working hours for lectures was relatively lower, but they are prone to get stress related illness with 25% compared to others.
As is observed, Most of the occupants has more than 30 hours of work in a week except lectures, they has just 25 hours. Programmers, lawyers, and chefs has less than or equal to 40 hours duty in a week and they have affected illness by stress account for five, eight, and ten percent respectively.
With regards to the doctors and writers, they were undergone illness with eight percent, whereas, their working hours approximately, 52 and 45 hours each. Moreover, business man working 70 hour weekly but their proportion of illness (11%) comparatively lower than movie producers who works in a 60 hour period with 18% of disease affection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the highest'.
Suggestion: in the highest
...rall, working hours of business man was in highest position among the given workers. In fa...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...of work in a week except lectures, they has just 25 hours. Programmers, lawyers, an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7219645312 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4533042601 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217523076365 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111912162721 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391063936962 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150548664517 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044299970466 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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