The given table illustrate the information about the sales of fairteade-labelled coffee and bananas in five countries during year to 1990 and 2004, which countries are UK , Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, Sweden.
As can be from first table shows that, sales of coffee in 1990 and 2004. First and foremost the, sales were 1.5 million of euros in 1998 by UK people, when coffee sales of this country had increased in year 2004, it figure was 20 million of euros.In addition, the number of coffee sales were highest of Denmark in year 2004 as compared to year 1990, which was 6 million of euros. Moreover, low proparation of coffee's sales of Sweden in year 1990 and 2004, which were 4.8 and 1 million of euros respectively.
According to the, second table shows that, auction of bananas.what is more, high ratio of bought to bananas through Switzerland person in year 2004 , it was 47 million of euros, which was more grouth by 23 million of euros as compared to year 1999. Apart from the, in year 1999 and 2004, UK and Belgium sales of bananas were 0.6 and 1.8 millions respectively , which was slightly raised approximately by 4.5 and 3.5 million of euros in year 2004 respectively.
In overall, it can be seen from both table shows that, low purchased of fairteade-labelled coffee and bananas by Denmark masses ,as well in UK and Switzerland had increased cell of coffee and bananas in year 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82916666667 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85503699702 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454166666667 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7608793106 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.571428571 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271244203546 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166371501483 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946437326324 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216877909395 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101116718002 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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