IELTS WRITING TASK 1. DESCRIBE THE DIAGRAM
The diagram illustrated forested land in millions of hectares in six continants of the world in 15 years, from 1990 to 2005.
Overall , the forested land in these different parts exprienced three trends : stablity , increasing and decreasing.
First and foremost , Europe was the only one area where has increased trend. It became higher and higher in the table. Europe kept the top all 15 years. In the past , the number of forests in this continant was more and more expanded. In addition, this place was the highest level with 1,001,000 hectares in 2005. Secondly , Africa and South America were 2 places where were declined forest land. Lastly, North America and Oceania didn't have too much chance for 15 years. They weren't nosedive or increase dramatically and constantly. Oceania got its lowest level in 2005 and it was also become the most plummeted forest area all over the world. In general , the forested land of these places were change very slowly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ith 1,001,000 hectares in 2005. Secondly , Africa and South America were 2 places...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.975 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44205683372 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64375 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3990477522 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0154096967711 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00540759268194 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179349559451 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0216303707277 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305899636423 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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