Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle . Others , however , say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
One of the big issues in some parts of the world today is that of unhealthy lifestyles and the effects that unhealthy lifestyles have on people and society . This is not just a personal issue, it's also a social and medical one .
For a lot of people , it's easy to have an unhealthy lifestyle . They spend most of their time sitting at desks at work . In fact , this has become more and more true of people over time , because jobs are involved physical movement have been replaced by jobs involving computers .
Another reason is that they use their cars for every journey instead of walking sometimes . So they get very little exercise , and this is very bad for them . And many people , in particular young people , spend a lot of their free time sitting down and looking at screens . They watch movies or play computer games all the time , instead of going out and doing sport and taking exercise . Food is another issue . Nowadays , many people eat junk food all the time and this is very bad for you .
People are very aware of this issue and they want to stay fit and healthy . In most places , it's not difficult to do this . There are gyms and fitness centres where people can go , and lots of people do this . In addition , there is a lot of information about what to eat and it's not difficult or expensive to eat healthy food . The whole subject gets a lot of publicity in the media . As a result of all this , many people find it's easy to stay fit and healthy .
In conclusion , it's very easy for a lot of people to have unhealthy lifestyles and this can cause medical problems because they can eventually require some kind of medical treatment , which puts more pressure on the medical profession . On the other hand , it's not at all difficult for people to avoid these problems by taking regular exercise and eating healthy food .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51063829787 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29648984942 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45896656535 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4241989824 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1052631579 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316765709887 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110642554927 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872604407624 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188348219142 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477473607027 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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