Nowadays, an increasing number of people concern that whether living in the modern world is undermining fitness lifestyle. While some people devote this opinion, the others contradict this idea. In my opinion, i support the later opinion.
it is clear that people these days spend a major part of their days on working or studying , hence, tine saving meals are on top of their agenda regardless of the hidden catastrophes. On the other words, fast food, processed food which are likely to be a convenience contain a astronomical amount of additives, sugars and sodium that are the key factors leading to dangerous diseases namely heart stroke, obese, diabetes. Besides, as people eating habits getting worse and worse, so are the rate of exercise activities. People tend to prefer cars, motorbikes then walking or bicycles, using lifts instead of stare. Moreover, social and working stress seems to become first priority while gym schedule are neglected. Those kind of habits also contribute a huge part to creating these deadly diseases.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the birth of internet and smartphones facilitate balanced diet and keeping fit. The available of tremendous diet menu, cardio exercise enables people to entail a suitable menu and workout schedule which used to be challenging before. Moreover, with the development of online fitness clubs, people could receive numerous useful advice for the daily nutrition, workout routine from professtional. Besides, these people would give motivation for the trainees and assist them staying away from a fiasco. in addition, the blooming of healthy lifestyle encourage more and more people begin concerning about health, weights. They steadily recognize the demerits and the detrimental effects of their eating habits and attempt to vary theirs
In conclusion, although the distractions of modernized society is inevitable, i believe that keeping fit and having a healthy intakes is totally possible as long as we remain right strategies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38291139241 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71221104012 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.086273579 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284664792685 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794090223759 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507614494742 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152095090925 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602177641254 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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