The illustrations demonstrate the typical of rain per month and temperature for a specific area situated in East Africa.
The illustrations demonstrate the typical of rain per month and temperature for a specific area situated in East Africa.
According to the graph, despite experiencing some fluctuations, the normal rainfall and temperature follow the same pattern reaching to their peak in April, Oct, Nov, and experiencing the lowest proportion between June and August.
Looking at the bar chart, it is crystal clear that the average rain is the highest in Apr, with approximately 280 millimeters followed by Oct and Nov with roughly 150 M. To be precise, from January until March it had remained around 20 M and in March its constituted around 100M before reaching the summit in Apr. Since then, it has diminished until July which faced the lowest number followed by a dramatic rise to Nov, before going down in Dec.
Regarding the temperature, it is initiated from 21 in Jan and reached its first peak in Mar and plunged until Jul which made the lowest number with nearly 20. After that, its soared and experienced the second rise in Oct with around 23 and dropped dramatically in the final month of the survey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89304812834 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7340274954 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625668449198 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0743484822 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217292975581 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156509489161 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.344676100868 0.0843802449381 408% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266941474364 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.423250786483 0.0819641961636 516% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.