The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.
The diagrams illustrate the process of making chocolate.
Overall,there are 10 steps in this process, beginning with guiding where to collect material an ending with liquid chocolate production.
The first stage of the process is collecting the ripe red pots from Cacao Tree which is grown in South of America, Africa and Indonesia. after that, harvesting all the post which was collected and gathering white cocoa beans. next, beans is fermented before being spread in sun to dry. Then, all beans is put in large sacks and delivered by train all lorry to factory.
In the next stage of the process, beans is crushed and outer shell is removed after all beans was roasted. Finally, the inner part is pressed and the liquid chocolate is produced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...rocess of making chocolate. Overall,there are 10 steps in this process, beginning...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...South of America, Africa and Indonesia. after that, harvesting all the post which was...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...lected and gathering white cocoa beans. next, beans is fermented before being spread...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., beans is fermented before being spread in sun to dry. Then, all beans is put in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48432982589 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3768616431 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896368665531 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465595318163 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713150157522 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691514890473 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462805231157 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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