City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost. Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?
Nowadays people living in city don't socialize with their neighbors often and the community's feeling has been lost. because they are really busy with work and they just want to relax after a tiring day in their home. So, the best way to bring everyone and their neighbours together is that there should be more message about the role of neighbours.
The first reason of this problem is the amount of work that they have to do in one day. As can be seen, people who live in city mostly have a busy day with the hustle and bustle life. after tiring day, they just want to reduce stress by themselves. Beside, some of them think that talking with neighbours is time-consuming. Furthermore, they are always impressed by modern technology and most of them choose using smartphone or television to relax because of its convenience. they can chat, make video calls to the others and sharing many things. that's all the reason why people rarely socialize with their neighbors today.
There are some solutions for this issue. Firstly, the government should give to all the people messages about the important role of neighbors. Secondly, movies film directors have more productions which has content about neighbors. For example, they can talk about the needs when we are alone, we don't know how to spell problem without internet or any relatives.
In conclusion, people who live in city don't communicate with neighbors as much as they used to because of some reasons such as busy work all the improvement of technology. However, we can tackle with the messages in films or that from government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89338235294 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51671531343 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2507048797 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207150361303 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707952484295 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875735137301 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124990118406 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547745350431 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.