Increasing the gap between rich and poor is one of major issue in the society. What are its effects? Discuss some solutions.
The world is going through countless problems but the primary one is rising difference between wealthy and destitute people. The key impact of this is the injustice rise in society, however, it can be resolved by framing new policies.
The widening of income difference give rise to biasness which negatively affect the growth of a region. Most of the riches enjoy everything in life whereas underprivileged one’s are struggling even for basic necessities such as food, cloth and shelter. To fulfill these requirements, most of them choose the way of crime like robbery which increases the crime rate. Moreover, poor also thrive of medical facilities due to which numerous health issues occur in that sector, another reason for this is unhygienic living conditions. According to a survey conducted by economic forum of world, only 1% people of Kenya holding its half wealth resulting in unrealistic living conditions.
The optimum authorities should setup new laws, providing equal opportunities to everyone irrespective of income to minimize the variation. The free education should be provided to everyone so that one can empower one’s life by acquiring good job. As well as medical amenities should also be free of cost so that all people can spend a healthy lifestyle. To illustrate my point of view a report published by world bank states that in Norway the citizens do not have to pay for education resulting in no difference between salaries of people.
To conclude, half of the globe is suffering from the dilemma of income difference which has detrimental impacts on civilization as growth rate become exclusively low because of offense but it can be addressed by implementing strategies of equivalent chances to every human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... world, only 1% people of Kenya holding its half wealth resulting in unrealistic li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 965.302439024 154% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27402135231 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91690364866 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 106.607317073 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3048473584 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101503177271 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337309905748 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280457203917 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053647716252 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355738710301 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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