Essay topics:
International visitors in New Zealand: transport used during visit
The diagram provides information about the means of transport that international visitors used when they visited New Zealand.
Overall, it can be seen that public transport was more popular than private transport.
The commonest means of transport people used to move were cars, which was approximately seventy percent of visitors chose this vehicle for their travel. Plane and coach were used almost the same amount. The percentage of visitors used them was above thirty. The fourth most popular means of transport were trains, People did not have a preference for boats, so it made up for about seven percent, was the least in five means of communication which were mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 579.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 110.0 196.424390244 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26363636364 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61876571772 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4178571301 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308888570334 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169512113432 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158516860461 0.0843802449381 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252541289497 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183932558533 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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