The line chart below shows serious violent crime levels from 1978 to 2000 in the US. Seriou violent crimes include rape, robbery, aggravated assaults and homicide.
The line chart illustrates the degree of serious violent crimes happened in the US over the period of 22 years.
Overall, the violent crime rate was the highest, while the number of crimes arrested was the lowest during the period shown. Also, there was a downward trend in the severe crime levels.
In the first ten years, there was a slight fluctuation in total violent crime. By about 1988, it reached its peak of nearly 4.5 offenses per thousand Americans, while the lowest record in the period given was around 3 offenses in 1980. Victimisations varied between 2 and 2.5 offenses from 1978 to 1988, while the crime recorded by police steadily rose reaching its highest in 1994, over 1.5 offenses in a thousand people in the US. The arrest rate remained the lowest, starting at around 0.3 to 0.5 offenses per 1,000.
From 1988 onwards, the figures for serious violent crime saw a gradual decrease, and so did victimisations reported to polcie. In 2000, there were 3 out of 1,000 Americans committed to violent crime, while half as many victims were reported to the police. Meanwhile, there were slight decline in the number of crimes recorded by police and arrests for violent crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84803921569 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43296812762 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1840019363 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288394920066 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132812586362 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844572602764 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204434331054 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747038246918 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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