The line chart details the proportion of residents living in Australia in millions from different regions between 1976 and 2011.
The line chart compares the distribution of Australian citizens coming from the United Kingdom, Asian countries and others with a total of over 35 years, commencing in 1976
From a general perspective, there was a marked similar trend in Other and total statistics at first glance, which fluctuated moderately throughout the period. It is also clear that the year 1991 witnessed a significant point at which the resident numbers of Asia, the Uk and Other are equal before reversing its orders.
In terms of Britain and Asian countries, while Asia number can witness a considerable rise in Asia, the opposite was true for the UK, which declined gradually. Specifically, the former stood at roughly 5 million(m) in 1976 and then climbed to a peak at precisely 15m at the end of the period. In contrast, The line graph noticed approximately 15 and 5m of the latter in the initial year compared to 2011.
Turning to the Others and Total ratio, both of them showed the same variation. In detail, Starting at over 10m in the first year, Others features dropped to 7m over a decade, which subsequently recovered to the highest record at 14m in 2006. Almost identical to others, the component of the total group surged to 25 million after hitting the lowest point at under 20 million in 1996, 20 years from the starting point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85777777778 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71856897723 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595555555556 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4429506962 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.625 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0852991856464 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347895118866 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268326362385 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531995477427 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132196718848 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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