The line charts illustrate population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided charts give information on the international population trends in terms of areas and age structure during a 90-year span commencing from 1950.
From a cursory glance, it is evident that during the studied period, the population trends of all sectors are on an upward trajectory with urban population leads in terms of locations and age group 15-65 has the largest population.
A closer insight into the first chart reveals that in 1950, the population of urban areas accounted for 7%, with a 3% higher than that of rural area. Until 2020, while urban population has risen significantly to 25% and is anticipated to keep increasing to 38% in 2040, the percentage of rural population have and will hovered around 5%. Finally, the total population trend has been going up enormously and is predicted to reach 43% at the end of the surveyed period.
Going into details with the second chart, it is clear that in 1950, while the proportion of people under 15 and over 65 started at the same position, 3%, that of the age group 15-65 began with 6%. The over 65 population, which experienced a small fluctuation in the beginning and a meager uptick to 5% in 2020, is expected to hover around 5% for the remaining period. The population under 15 have and will be on the same trend with the previous one, except for a small rise in 1960. In contrast, the 15-65 age group exhibitied a sharp increase to 32% in 2020 and is anticipated to reach 35% by 2040.
- Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems Others however believe technology is the way to solve these problems Discuss both views and give you 67
- Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress but the quality at work To what extent you agree or disagree 73
- The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 87
- The graph below shows the usage of oil in four different countries between 1966 and 2006 as a percentage of total energy use within each nation Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hover'
Suggestion: hover
...ntage of rural population have and will hovered around 5%. Finally, the total populatio...
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Line 7, column 393, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'have' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'haves'.
Suggestion: haves
...maining period. The population under 15 have and will be on the same trend with the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68992248062 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64808970085 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9978311009 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.444444444 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163353994014 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746123754109 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513180693295 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120748894712 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503247717003 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.