The line graph give information regarding the number of visitors per month in summer, 2013. X-axis shows the months (June, July, August, September) Y-axis shows number of visitors in thousands.
Overall, there is rise in number of visitors in British Museum and Science Museum whereas there is decrease in number of people visiting national history museum.
In June, 600,000 people visited British Museum, there was constant rise in number of visitors and reached a peak of around 750,000 in July, followed by reduction in number of visitors to 600,000 in early August and fell to 500,000 at mid August with a sudden rise of around 650,000 in September. On the other hand, visitors to Science Museum was 400,000 in June with gradual decrease reached around 350,000 in July which further decreased to 300,000 in August thereby, rose steadily to 450,000 in September.
National History Museum had around 550,000 visitors in June which fell drastically to approximately 480,000 visitors in July. The number remained constant till August with gradual rise of around 490,000 visitors in September.
In conclusion, British Museum had highest number of visitors in all four months.
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- The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
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...mber. In conclusion, British Museum had highest number of visitors in all four months.
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Discourse Markers used:
['regarding', 'whereas', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.357487922705 0.268076937826 133% => OK
Verbs: 0.0917874396135 0.116061578633 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0579710144928 0.0759168565197 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0193236714976 0.0366838410393 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.207729468599 0.155750635184 133% => OK
Participles: 0.0144927536232 0.0379272487307 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.48405394321 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289855072464 0.0210936926555 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0386473429952 0.0948980150116 41% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00966183574879 0.00967000014798 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1183.0 1161.00487805 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.9 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29255319149 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.5 0.337110787985 148% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.351063829787 0.247514529752 142% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18085106383 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.063829787234 0.112407865282 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48405394321 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.9311143331 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8999284692 42.9750493124 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.875 135.714022679 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.0094962315 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 58.6063829787 47.7609492067 123% => OK
Elegance: 5.21739130435 2.94281807926 177% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206098451633 0.418131533498 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.257025376279 0.181151798455 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.146138539585 0.0850326197045 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.836178106478 0.706616315825 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114345976308 0.157042692854 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141453263001 0.228904883108 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943081009706 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384579114335 0.367819155151 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.168305680876 0.0812612215331 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149944389418 0.316326947829 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097021739253 0.0921553760075 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.