The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums
between June and September 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the differences in the quantity of tourists visiting three London museums from June to September 2013.
In general, visitors gave the top priority for the British Museum and least preference to Natural History Museum of the whole, while the Science museum took the average choice of visitors.
In particular, the number of visitors to the British Museum was the most fluctuated over the 4 months period, starting with 600 thousand in June, then next month went rapidly to the peak at nearly 750 thousand and suddenly plunge to the bottom to only 500 thousand in August, before rose again to 650 thousand in September.
In terms of individuals visiting the Natural History Museum, with only 400 thousand of visitors in June then decreased gradually and continuously to 300 thousand in August, then surprisingly went to a peak with almost 450 thousand in September.
For Science Museum, visitors decreased significantly from 550 thousand in June to only 380 thousand one month later, then leveled out that number until August, before slightly growth to 450 by the end of September.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... again to 650 thousand in September. In terms of individuals visiting the Natur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65232136024 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532967032967 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.070586075 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 187.2 112.824112599 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931429014107 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701712516812 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635629148341 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701712516812 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635629148341 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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