The line graph below shows the annual number of visits to Australia by overseas tourists. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the tourists came from.
The supplied infographics provide data on the number of tourists who visited Australia throughout a 30-year period of time from different countries.
Australia was visited by 8.8 million tourists in 1975. The majority of the tourists was from Japan and South Korea at 3.2 and 2.9 million people respectively in that year.
The number of tourists to Australia was almost double of the figure of 1975 at 16 million 10 years later. The figure continued to increase significantly, and it reached nearly 24.5 million tourists in 1995.
At the end of the period of time, 2005, Australia was attended by over 30 million tourists from all over the globe; the main bulk of the tourists consisted of Japanese at 12 million, South Korean tourists came at the second place with 9.1 million and Europeans were the third with 4.5 million.
The line graph indicates that Australia became an attractive destination for over the 30-year period of time since the number of tourists rocketed from 8.8 million to 30.4 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... visited Australia throughout a 30-year period of time from different countries. Australia...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... tourists in 1995. At the end of the period of time, 2005, Australia was attended by over 3...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...active destination for over the 30-year period of time since the number of tourists rocketed f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02958579882 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60437050017 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.547615086 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169302148894 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105330576278 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433579709272 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118727005711 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274453494552 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.