The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

Essay topics:

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.

The line graph compares three regions in terms of exports of coffee from 2002 to 2012.Overall, it can be seen that the three regions witnessed a significant increase over the period of time.

As the graph shows, Brazil and Costa Rica produced the most coffee they stood at fairly similar level of between 11 and 15 million kilograms in 2002. The level of coffee exported in Brazil increased gradually over the following four years, while Costa Rica witnessed a dramatic fall to around 7 million. However, they both then followed a similar pattern increasing significantly to 20 million in Costa Rica and 25 million in Brazil.

By contrast, the coffee export from Colombia community began at 5 million kilograms per year in 2002, which was lower than the two other countries (Brazil and Costa Rica). In 2002, they shipped approximately 12 million kilograms of coffee, but there was a sharp fall to 2008, when export plunged to a low of 2 million. Then, the exports increased dramatically to end the period at 15 million.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
... of exports of coffee from 2002 to 2012.Overall, it can be seen that the three regions ...
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Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tnessed a significant increase over the period of time. As the graph shows, Brazil and Cost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88505747126 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63867592718 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0521808466 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227930378524 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113275374508 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949918100179 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182763595783 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921052415935 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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