Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
In recent years, historical places have been received a lot of attractive from tourists, not local people. Given that this case leads to a whole loose of knowledge for people, identifying the reason behind it is key to finding the solutions.
There are a number of reasons why locals do not visit historical places. Since they knew all about it through their parents, history subject in school, they feel it is unnecessary to broaden their horizons in this aspect. Plus, because of the way people learn history in the past, almost all people, thereby, decided to avoid their country's history. Moreover, people must pay an amount of money to stay in these places. For example, in my town, it costs from 30.000 to 40.000 VND per person that is quite expensive for the locals.
Nevertheless, there are also a variety of solutions to attract more local communities to visit these places. First, the presidents of these places should have some active ways to attract people. By updating the collection, organizing some marketing champions in social media, newspapers which can help to improve the figure of local visitors. Second, government should actively help them by decrease or free the entrance fee for local people. This will give them a chance to explore the country's history.
In conclusion, even though the number of local visitors is pretty low compared to tourists in recent years, there are various ways to make it higher. Advertisement and cut the entrance fee can be two of the most effective ways to attract local visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'find'?
Suggestion: find
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00775193798 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5479949192 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6673390207 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333979550848 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10814319425 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804133708189 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183681334621 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043332808206 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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