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The maps given illustrate the improvement in an American city between 1998 and 2010. Overall, many developments on the both commercial and social facilities such as factories, market and the Church have changed. However, residential houses and gas station were unchanged.
In 1940, there was a huge industrial area positioned eastern to petrol pump. This was then by 2010 improved into airport and commercial buildings. In the west, local supermarket was shaped into two massive commercial buildings. The social and religious facilities such as the Church was also changed into sport stadium, and a green land located next to the factories was transformed into a big supermarket which was built along the main street during the year given.
The spots that were not changed ware residential houses and gas station. The pump was located across to the green park and not too far from factories. Interestingly, the houses built on the separated location did not have any changes event the sum of them. There were around eleven houses in 1948 and also in 2010.
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- The map below shows the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010 63
- Most adult people are spending their life time at work station so that job satisfaction is a significant point of personal welfare. There are at least two factors of why people feel satisfied on their job; gaining high salary and comfort work station. Thi 78
- The maps given illustrate the improvement in an American city between 1998 and 2010. Overall, many developments on the both commercial and social facilities such as factories, market and the Church have changed. However, residential houses and gas station 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are residential houses and gas station. The pump was located across to the green pa...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'changes'' or 'change's'?
Suggestion: changes'; change's
...the separated location did not have any changes event the sum of them. There were aroun...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eleven houses in 1948 and also in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67322321199 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0691871134 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0445995740353 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209789026919 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663411153175 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436618076886 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617471205909 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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