MAP
The maps illustrate what happens in the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005
Overall, it can see that the provided map reveals the dramatic changes
In 1990, Seaside resort of Templeton was undeveloped place. Until 2005, after construction and development, the place became very dense and useful with its infrastructure and accommodation. First of all, the trees had been totally cut – down in the East on the right side of the river where had been replaced by factory and airplane. Otherwise, school and hospital were still there. The same development had been taken place in the Southwest where trees and small houses to give away to apartment blocks. Three new apartment blocks had been built. A noticeable change, the big supermarket was erected. Additionally, the new housing area had been settled between the roads running through the river from east to west in front of supermarket. The sea had been used for transportation of cars. Finally, another an interesting developments was extension of railway along the coastline.
- In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
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- TASK 2In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'development'?
Suggestion: development
...f cars. Finally, another an interesting developments was extension of railway along the coas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, still, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15882352941 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85781269953 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664705882353 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3544846356 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940304477866 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247621683999 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742865051996 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16348864095 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116205676669 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.