TASK 2
In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is plenty of evidence to suggest that Childhood obesity has been becoming a typical sign of health deterioration health nowadays. While I accept that the duty of government is an important part, I believe that children’s parent plays a better role in the obesity epidemic.
On the one hand, the responsibility of government is to enhance the well-being of the community. If the public health is improved, it manipulates the risk of obesity in children. Consequently, it is imperative that the health authorities realize a threat and put solutions into practice conscientiously. The government needs to create an incentive program to encourage having healthy diets and doing more physical activities in lieu of eating junk food and watching television.
On the other hand, there is an indispensable need for children’s parents to be in charge of the unhealthy life in their offspring. The main culprit of the problem is parent poor's choice of diets that their intake of foods is high in fats and sugar. There are several actions for parents to take including checking the ingredients on food labels to make sure that these contain vital nutrients and curbing the detrimental additives for their health. In addition, the other problem is lack of exercise as a result of the prevalence of sedentary lifestyle. The initiative is to take steps to help children take regular vigorous exercise and build a consistent healthy habit. The parent should not only limit the waste time on indoor activities as playing video games but also spend time on instructing them in doing sport.
In conclusion, two sides of obesity in children should be considered. But I believe that the impact of parents is a superior factor stimulating the development of children health.
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- TASK 2In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14186851211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03681666892 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4731845159 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962668375021 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339313069698 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267380755729 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658681419464 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178551962957 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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