The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and the present

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and the present.

The given map illustrates the developments of a village called Ryemouth for 25 years. Overall, there are many changes in the village, the most noticeable ones being the elimination of the fishing industry, an increase in accommodation and the introduction of sports facilities.
In 1995, there was a fishing port in the south of the village with a fish market. Next to it, there was a small cafe and on the other side of the coastal road, there were shops along with a hotel. To the north-east of the village, there were farmland and a park with trees. The main housing area was situated at the north-west of the village around the main road. There was a total of 12 houses which 4 of these were encircled by a smaller side street.
At present, it can be seen that the fishing port and fish market is gone. In place of the market now stands new apartments. Also, shops are turned into restaurants. The cafe and the hotel remain although now there is a car park next to the hotel. The farmland has been converted to a golf course while the forest park has been removed for tennis courts. 4 new apartments have been built in the housing area, along with an additional street.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52112676056 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51870824099 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9699786715 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0769230769 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103606571908 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370106995673 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747078507949 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766044512972 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055830324576 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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