The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the city. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates two possible places for supermarkets establishment in the town of Garlsdon, home to a 65,000 population.
Overall, the first construction site will be located in the countryside and far from the town center yet more accessible to the Hindon population. Meanwhile, the second location is planned to be built downtown and more convenient to people in Bransdon and Cranston.
It can be seen that the first supermarket will be established in the outskirt area adjacent to the railway and the main road that connects people from Cransdon, downtown, and the industry. Although located far away from the downtown, the first supermarket has potential customers from Hindon with up to 10,000 people.
The second site will be developed in the city's center, surrounded by the housing and industry area. Even though the railway passes the site, it is still far from the main road. However, the location has three times more potential customers than the first one has, and they come from the neighboring areas of Bransdon and Cransdon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble to the Hindon population. Meanwhile, the second location is planned to be bui...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16374269006 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79185720865 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9782641024 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180020883198 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886463934026 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124939498882 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147135138891 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154843282496 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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