Map for building tourism
The provided maps indicate the incredible changes that occur in a island after constructing the tourist infrastructure.
It is clear that the island has become a complete new version with the high convenience to attract more visitors after this developments. Additionally, the sea surrounding the island is took advantage of to have activities for tourists.
According to the first map, the island is empty and huge with the small number of trees on its ground before the construction. Besides, there is a beach in the west area of the island.
Moving to the second map, the most noticeable change can be seen is that there are many new buildings on the island. There are two groups of accomodation. While one group is situated in the island centre, another one is built to the west near the beach. All accommodations of each group are connected together by a footpath. Moreover, there is a recception between these two areas of accommodation which is surrounded by a vehicle track to lead to a restaurant in the north area of the island. While tourists can go down by this track to a pier where they sail the boats, they can walk on footpath to the beach for swimming from the western accommodation.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-08-22 | Phan Thị Minh Thiện | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...te the incredible changes that occur in a island after constructing the tourist ...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat occur in a island after constructing the tourist infrastructure. It is cle...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...venience to attract more visitors after this developments. Additionally, the sea sur...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ally, the sea surrounding the island is took advantage of to have activities for tou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, moreover, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82692307692 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92533756207 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572115384615 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.390815727 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2727272727 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123777521659 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424094400633 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534856140432 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719784253364 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163765922508 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.