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The given map depicts the transformation occured in one specific art gallery in Australia from 1950 to now.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the art gallery has undergone significant changes including relocation, new additions and replacement.
A closer look at the map reveals that in 1950, the center of the gallery was devoted for the sculpture display, covering the largest area. To the right wing, there were three equal sections which were used for early european, middle european and australian art exhibitions. Turning to the left, the whole area was divided into three equal sectors serving amenities. From the entrance, there were the bookshop, temporary exhibition and the café respectively. It is also noticeable that the courtyard occupied the whole area to the northends.
After an approximately 70-year period, the art gallery witnessed considerable changes. To be more specific, a new ticket booth has been constructed at the entrance to the sculpture display area, which still makes up the majority of the gallery. Even though the right side is still divided into three equal parts, the australian art exhibition room has been relocated at north-east, which used to be the courtyard, paving way for the establishment of the asian art showroom.The remaining of the courtyard was equally shared by a half to construct the australian aboriginal and children art room. Minor changes are observed in the left site as the temporary exhibition and bookshop remains the same. Nevertheless, the café has shrinked in half for a new WC addition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...establishment of the asian art showroom.The remaining of the courtyard was equally ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90735893897 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4426732112 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744815381481 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318234631906 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712824507101 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697639403847 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822703115918 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.