The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now ans plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps compare Islip downtown for the time being and it's future layout because there is fundamental plan to change this area in order to be more attractive and modern.
Overall, what Stands out is that this area will undergo significant changes in various ways such as brings new facilities and upgrade road condition.
As can be seen, dual carriageway will be constructed and we'll change cityscape which surrounds ISliptown center, while it has just a main road at the moment, seprated this region into northern part with some shops and southern part with another shops together with vast housing area and a big park. Moreover, a special road for school in the northwest.
The future plan comprises marketable modifications. main road will become pedestrian precincts. Although southern part of pedestrian area will remain the same, northern shops will turn into bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing area next to the car park in the northeast of the future plan. In addition, park is remained at the same location aswell as school but park will be shrunk. housing area in the south of plan is divided into two separate part by southern part of dual carriageway.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Main
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Suggestion: Housing
...well as school but park will be shrunk. housing area in the south of plan is divided in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01005025126 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54113403578 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6052720146 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0639295574583 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352570105289 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348516911923 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046523982364 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448954033848 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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