The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps above illustrate the present situation of the centre of a small town so-called Islip town and its plan in the future with various advancements changing. Overall, it is very clear that the main change to the town centre will be constructed a dual carriageway around the centre.
Currently, Islip town centre is located near with a countryside in the north. The town centre also has a main road in the middle of its centre. There are several shops in the north and south of the main road, while housing is located in south of the town centre. Additionally, a school is located in the south-west and a park in the south-east of the town centre.
In the future, the main road will constructed a dual carriageway around town centre. The main road will be converted into pedestrians only and still located in the middle of the town centre. Moreover, while the row of shops along the south side of the pedestrians only will still remain the same, those along the north will be demolished and converted become bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing. Those buildings are located in order from west to the east along the pedestrians only in the north. Additionally the school will be expanded, while park is reduced in size.
To conclude all the plans, the main change is a dual carriageway construction around the centre with additionally changes in size of school and park and shops in the north of main road will changed with various advancements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'construct'
Suggestion: construct
...tre. In the future, the main road will constructed a dual carriageway around town centre. ...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ong the pedestrians only in the north. Additionally the school will be expanded, while park...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
...nd shops in the north of main road will changed with various advancements.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73828125 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62959686323 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390625 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1607424751 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.083333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149377501351 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782164432137 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756099990138 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119846925762 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084833305607 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.