The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day

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The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day.

The given diagram illustrates the changes that took place in Art Gallery with comparisons between its status in 2005 and now.
Overall, that can be seen from the maps, there are significant modifications and replacements inside the Art Gallery.
Firstly, some areas have remained the same as they used to be in 2005. These features include three exhibition rooms on the right side of the buildings and the entrance.
Except for these areas, the Art Gallery experienced a huge renovation in other parts. In the center of the building, the locations of the entrance hall and reception have been moved near to the entrance. Next to the old stairs, there has been the appearance of one new Lift.
Besides, a more detailed look into the left corner of the gallery reveals considerable transformations. The cafe, gallery office, and exhibition room 4 in 2005 vanished to make room for a new gallery shop, vending machine area, temporary exhibition, and children's area. Moreover, there is a complement of a ramp for wheelchair next to the entrance.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01149425287 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83835906885 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0563718253 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158255419347 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053172144325 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579947614673 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841935557674 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551375469423 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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