The maps illustrate the changes that took place in a particular science park between 2008 and the present date.
Overall, the comparison of two maps reveals a large transformation mainly in the northwest and the southeast part.
To begin with, although a few years back there was a grassland in the northwest of the park, later a RND center was installed on the vacant land. Going forward to the northeast portion, the reception which was situated previously besides the office section, now was converted into a university hub. In addition, new cycle path was constructed along with each side of the road. Consequently, a bus stop was also made where the cycle path got finished to the northeast of the road.
In the middle of the park the parking area got shrank to a square shape and few connecting paths were developed on both sides of it. Preciously, one road was made to connect with the reception, now became a university hub; and another one connected with the newly built station in the south, at the middle of the railway.
Though the green area in the southwest portion remained the same for the period, the IT center besides the woodland was turned in to an innovation center. However, huge development took place in the southeast area of the park. One result of this was the existing cyber security building got extended to a L shape one (earlier was square) to the east of the parking zone, where a large grassland was used to be previously. Moreover, few trees were also chopped down to make way for the extension of the security building.
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry 78
- Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports Do you agree or disagree 73
- The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 89
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...rtion remained the same for the period, the IT center besides the woodland was turned ...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...emained the same for the period, the IT center besides the woodland was turned in to a...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cyber security building got extended to a L shape one earlier was square to the e...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75735294118 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60094639417 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8197479279 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140756215785 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590426134322 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556132061727 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990957503212 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525479025061 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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