The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons

The charts compare the ownership status of different types of electric equipment in a specific region and number of hours people tended to spend in a week for household staffs respectively.

Overall, three types of appliances have been listed- Washing Machine, Refrigerator and Vacuum Cleaner. While the uses of all the items had increased over the time, weekly working hours for domestic households decreased significantly.

Though the ownership percentage of refrigerator was the lowest (5%) at the beginning of 1920, the household percentage of owing the cooler machine had found to be increased in every 20 years. Eventually the ownership had reached to the highest point during 1980 and thereafter remained constant for the next 39 years.On the other hand, despite of holding the highest percentage of ownership during the early years, the ownership of washing machine dropped to the lowest point in 1980 (65%). The ownership of the machine later increased slightly in the following years and stood at 75% at the end of 2019.The growth of ownership percentage for vacuum cleaner was steady until it reached to the pick (100%) in 2000. For the coming years the percentage of household ownership was the same as the ownership percentage of refrigerator.

For the same period, the working hours of housework declined and reached to the lowest at 10 hours per week from its initial 50 weekly hours reflecting the less interest of doing domestic work as the possessions of electronic devices increased for every household.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21138211382 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78798968961 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508130081301 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5834392206 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.25 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1204812266 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598638513229 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209528203603 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730614177923 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207748873256 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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