Keeping the environment healthy and sound is one if the most discussed agendas of nowadays. Some people believe that, it is the duty and responsibility of the human to protect and take care of the its surrounding; while other believe that it is the primary responsibility of the Government to take initiatives protecting the environment from getting polluted. This essay is tended to discus both the points from a neutral view.
On one hand, it is the human beings who get affected the most from a polluted environment. This is why, they should be responsible for maintaing their surrounded habitant keep clean and pollution free. Firstly, it will help them to live in a well-maintained environment; which eventually help them to be lead a disease-free life. In addition, an ill-maintained environment gradually becomes polluted and results a miserable life for the future generations. For instance, people in Minamata, a Japanese town has been suffering from Minamata Disease since late 60’s when the Minamata River got polluted from industrial wastage. Hence, the people should be aware themselves and keep an eye to their surrounding before it got contaminated from any external substance.
On the other hand, Government should take necessary steps to make the people aware regarding the water and air pollution; as sometimes people do not possess enough knowing about how the environment gets polluted. This phenomenon is very common in rural areas. For instances, In Haryana village people use to burn domestic wastage for cooking food. As a result, the neighborhood weather in Delhi encounters with air pollution; and eventually had become the unhealthiest city in the world. To get rid of the situation recently the Indian Government has taken the agenda to aware the Haryana dwellers of the air pollution that has been created by them since long ago.
In conclusion, it can be said that it is the duty and responsibility of both people and the Government to keep and protect the environment from pollution free. And, if both the parties joins together and work side-by-side it would ultimately help the next generation to live in a safe and sound future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...f the human to protect and take care of the its surrounding; while other believe that i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...or instances, In Haryana village people use to burn domestic wastage for cooking fo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14689265537 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99525090389 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8932683644 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278655946056 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792884268513 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122820520454 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18586651888 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141133623122 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...f the human to protect and take care of the its surrounding; while other believe that i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...or instances, In Haryana village people use to burn domestic wastage for cooking fo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14689265537 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99525090389 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8932683644 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278655946056 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792884268513 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122820520454 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18586651888 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141133623122 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.