The maps show the changes in the Denham town in the year 1986 and to the present
The maps illustrate the changes have taken in the Denham town since 1986.
Overall, the town witnessed a great deal of changes. At present, the town gives more focus on the housing rather than agriculture and farmland.
A river stoke has been running from the north east to the south west side of the town and there has been a bridge in the northern side of the river. The farmlands to the north east and south west region have been removed and more houses have been built on the either sides of the new link road, which extended to the east. Similarly, a new round shaped road has been developed in the place of south west farmland and more houses have also been built there.
A primary school has been modernized to the east of the road. The gardens which was located to the eastern side of the road have been replaced with more number of houses. Similarly, more number of houses have been constructed on the sides of the road which point towards south.
With regards to the changes have taken place in the western region, a new link road has been extended to the west, and more houses have also been built on either sides of the road. A post office to the west of the road remained in the same place, whereas shops to the north of the post office have been knocked down.
- Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- The maps show the changes in the Denham town in the year 1986 and to the present 56
- Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sidesand give your opinion. 73
- Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgeys on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree with this 61
- Some people believe all the wild animals should be protected while others think only some animal need to be saved Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, similarly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42616033755 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00686035196 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409282700422 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3441512547 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092071250232 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631968354762 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119472184921 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120262307062 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158572466895 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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