This map illustrate the development which too place coastal town in youngsville in newzeland time period between 1980 to 2005.
overall, all comparison between two maps that revels the changes in ruler area to urban area while the begin of the period city has under development but after the end of the period they have significant changes.
To commence with, in the 1980 town was much greener residential area and residential area was much greenery and single story house. While, The end of the period most of the place are develop. the green residential area was cutting down and replace with new many skyscraper and the woodland changes into big factories and warehouse and also in 2005 North side the River Alanah cut down the tree.
in 2005 Northside build the public park, stadium and hospital facility for the public. Railway station was develop and pass on the reaver aianah. The stadium was develope to near the lake and also build the parking facility. Beside the railway station in a northside build a marina point in the 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
This map illustrate the development which too place coastal...
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Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to place'?
Suggestion: to place
...is map illustrate the development which too place coastal town in youngsville in newzelan...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...nd time period between 1980 to 2005. overall, all comparison between two maps that r...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...anges in ruler area to urban area while the begin of the period city has under developmen...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s much greenery and single story house. While, The end of the period most of the plac...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...end of the period most of the place are develop. the green residential area was cutting...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e period most of the place are develop. the green residential area was cutting down...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun skyscraper seems to be countable; consider using: 'many skyscrapers'.
Suggestion: many skyscrapers
...a was cutting down and replace with new many skyscraper and the woodland changes into big facto...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... the River Alanah cut down the tree. in 2005 Northside build the public park, s...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...ity for the public. Railway station was develop and pass on the reaver aianah. The stad...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...side build a marina point in the 2005.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36577563 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.320168001 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179466525282 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736782283292 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720877325728 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122265276889 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750733672849 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.