The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future.
The given map illustrates the forecast of an industrial area, which will be transformed into building houses according to future plans.
In general, it experiences a significant change. It’s noticeable that the industrial area will be rebuilt and some buildings and modern facilities will be added.
At present, an entrance and reception located in the northern of the industrial area will have been completely replaced by 3 large buildings with 2 bedrooms and a big front garden. Turning to the western boundary of the land, packing and shortage will be rebuilt by a 3 bedroom and 4 bedroom house as planned in the future.
On the eastern of the site, the future plans describe that the factory which currently stands in the industrial park will be transformed into a parking area and apartments. Meanwhile, a lot of offices and canteen in the southern industrial area will be replaced by packing garages in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding houses according to future plans. In general, it experiences a significant...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...be rebuilt by a 3 bedroom and 4 bedroom house as planned in the future. On the eas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06493506494 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84433374288 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4893536019 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372464190547 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178621178449 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114999754465 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255067978569 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090667515558 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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