The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in future to reduce the number of accidents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
Given are the two maps delineating the transformations of the road system of a typical area in an upcoming period for the diminution of traffic accidents. It is perceptible that the region experiences moderate alterations with the presence of roundabout along with the addition of several facilities.
Along from north to south is the main street-Forest Road divides this region into two distinct areas. When it comes to the east side of the main road, there are accident hotpots at the junction of City Road and Forest Road, and at northern supermarket access in the middle of City Road. It is predicted that the appearance of a roundabout and the leading road to the supermarket from the roundabout instead respectively can minimize traffic crashes.
Regarding the other side of the mentioned region, as accidents happen frequently at the intersection of Forest Road and Low Lane in the south, Low Lane will be expanded to avoid them. City Road elongates and creates with Low Lane the interchange which is another accident-prone area. Thus, a set of traffic lights is estimated to install to control the traffic. According to the plan, houses along Lane Low and school at the further northest by Low Lane stay unchanged while the serpentine street of City Road and Forest may be turned into straightening.
- The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this What can be done to solve this problem 84
- The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this What can be done to solve this problem 84
- The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this What can be done to solve this problem 67
- The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in future to reduce the number of accidents Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 73
- The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this What can be done to solve this problem 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps delineating the transforma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91939233606 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7392737294 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.777777778 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12573563201 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533614190744 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462566797014 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855136927805 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345730657942 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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