Mixed charts
The table illustrates how often people visited Ashdown museum in the years before and after its refurbishment, while pie
charts indicate a survey of the people’s satisfaction during their visit of the same period. Overall, it can be seen that the number of people who visited the museum grow in the years before and after refurbishment, and their satisfaction also increased markedly over the same period.
Looking at the table in a detail, it is noticeable that the total number of visitors to the museum prior to refurbishment stood at 74,000, and this figure rose to 92,000 after it was refurbished.
Turing to pie charts, visitors who were satisfied before refurbishment was 30%, however, after it was refurbished the percentage increased by 10%. Similarly, the number of very satisfied visitors also increased dramatically from 15 to 35%. In contrast, museum visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied were in a decline from 40% to 15% and 10% to 5%, respectively. While, the ratio of people who did not respond to the survey remained the same, at 5%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-16 | Phạm Việt Cường | 56 | view |
| 2022-09-22 | Trần Ánh Vy | 73 | view |
| 2021-08-02 | Trandonghung | view | |
| 2019-08-28 | Ayaelgendy | 11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Charts
...nd after its refurbishment, while pie charts indicate a survey of the people's ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, similarly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14689265537 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01000067391 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2180421817 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.142857143 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0249875671244 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108481878798 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265725249395 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0154575884123 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267733284925 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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