Environment
Environmental issues with no doubt is a critical topic nowadays. It is argued that losing species represents the major reason that affects the environment, however, others believe that there are another reasons which have a vast effect on the environment more than it, such as global warming. An opinion will be reached out at the conclusion after discussing both views.
On the one hand, people believe that the extinction of some species constitute the primary reason for the environmental problems because it can affect the ecological balance negatively. For instance, the extinction of cats might lead to the increasing amount of rats which will have will affect the environmental balance eventually.
On the other hand, some people believe that global warming represents the main problem which affects the environment the most, including species. For example, when global warming happens it affects the weather and it makes changes thereof, such as having fewer areas of frozen mountains whereby the percentage of weather temperature will increase, which will result in the extinction of species, especially beers that lives on lower temperatures only and cannot accommodate in hectic weather. Thus, global warming is the main reason which affects the environment negatively.
In conclusion, it is felt that the loss of some species is not as the same importance as main importance as global warming which results in a range of problems that have an impact on species too. It is hoped that certain policies to be taken effectively to sustain its adverse impact on the environment.
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| 2024-10-11 | Tuan Harry | 78 | view |
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| 2024-09-19 | tata | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33992094862 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80900612251 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533596837945 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5095699903 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104458484395 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565524986778 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894584479006 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612019019861 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626856945974 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.