A narrative essay about the gift that is meaningful to me
Gifts are things that express someone’s love for us, so I always treasure all the gifts people gave me. For me, I have never forgotten an exceptional present that my parents prepared for me in the summer of 2015. That is an electric bicycle.
When I was in grade 8, I had to transfer to a new school, and in this place, I found that all my friends had a vehicle for themselves. But my parents always took me to school every day because they worried that I was lost, and I really did not like that. My father probably understood my sadness, so when I finished my high school examination and was on vacation, he secretly bought me an electric bicycle. Honestly, I was so surprised and happy with his present. At the moment I received it, I shouted with all my joy and hugged my dad tightly.
The electric bicycle was also the type of vehicle that I dreamed of. At that time, that bike was the most modern and lasted, so my dad had to spend a lot of money to buy it. Its body was covered in brown, looked so charmed and elegant. Beside pedals, the electric bicycle was also designed a place to put my feet on whenever tired. Because the bicycle was run by electricity, I felt like I did a good thing for the environment. My dad’s present was so useful for me in 3 years of high school. It helped me a lot in moving. Thanks to that bike, I could easily go to school as well as attend the extra classes to prepare better for the approaching national high school exam.
The electric bike is not only simply a gift but also the love and sympathy my dad and mom gave me. It accompanied me throughout high school. It is like a motivation for me to remember my parents' love and try to study harder day by day. Although I have a new motorbike now, the electric bicycle is still the most meaningful gift I have ever had.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, look, really, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 5.60731707317 1106% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23919308357 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4393446617 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 106.607317073 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 1.53170731707 1045% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 8.94146341463 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8403501705 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.55 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.35 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123384638579 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482005148378 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559191237115 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108307005129 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739840729626 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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