nowadays it is true that raising the cost of petrol is the best way to reduce emission and traffic problems in the world.
in the one hand, the main benefit of this issue is decrease petrol purchases for some people who poor form financial field.it is because, they who use petrol for some transportations and machines will think twice to buy it and start to limit the usage of engine which need much of petrol.for example, in eastern Indonesia used to native there very rarely take petrol for some activities.it was caused by the price of which is expensive.as a result, petrol usage also becoming low.but, traffic problem is still great.in my opinion make the petrol to be expensive is not handle the problem totally and there must be another solution.
meanwhile, on other hand the negative of this topic is increase instability lifestyle in society which need gasoline for their goods.it is due to they who buy petrol caused by need, will always buy it even thought the value is hight and it can be seen recently almost all of human need gasoline.for example, in Indonesia every body have motorcycle and others transportation, if the government up the gasoline value, they can't receive it and will protest.as a result the matter is not finish while the society lifestyle
will broken.
in my opinion, raise the benzine cost is not finish the traffic problem, so preserving the environment and a culture of healthy live are the main solution of this case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19907407407 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01240220487 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 22.4926829268 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.834948042 43.030603864 460% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.333333333 112.824112599 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 22.9334400587 314% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.23603664747 458% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11881776545 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942664303923 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595419276226 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943859611265 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593842110857 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 13.2329268293 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 61.2550243902 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 10.3012195122 315% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.4329268293 507% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.9970731707 280% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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