In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
From the chart, we have got the percentage of men and women of various age groups who had taken part in regular physical activities in 2010.
In male group, 15 to 24 age group is highest in number (52.8) and 35 to 44 age group is lowest (39.5) in percentage who had taken part in exercise works. 65 to over age group has shown much interest as their percentage is 46.7. Besides, there is only 2% difference between 55 to 64 age group (45.1%) and 45-54 age group (43.1). Apart from this, 25 to 34 age group has 42.2 % participation rate.
In female group, 45 to 54 age group’s participation rate 53.3%, which is highest in number, 55 to 64 age group is ranked second (53%) in the chart and 65 and over group have lowest interest (47.1%). 35 to 44 age group’s participation ration is 52.5%. 15 to 24 and 25 to 34 age group’s participation percentages are 47.7 % and 48.9 % respectively.
So, after seeing the male and female group, it is clear that young males were more interested to take part in 2010 physical activities program than young females. On contrary, Middle age (45 to 54) women were more enthusiastic than middle age males.
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?You should give reasons for your answer using your own 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 46
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. 73
- In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 78
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?You should give reasons for your answer using your own 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: highest
... In male group, 15 to 24 age group is highest in number 52.8 and 35 to 44 age group is lowest 3...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: highest
...os;s participation rate 53.3%, which is highest in number, 55 to 64 age group is ranked second 53...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
... 53% in the chart and 65 and over group have lowest interest 47.1%. 35 to 44 age group&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, second, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55825242718 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71192694294 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9570147524 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0101943906117 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00501290710099 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00657844917742 0.0843802449381 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00588942587503 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00635821060242 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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