the number of visitors to the city centre by car
The graph illustrates how many locals and outsiders visited the City Center by a car, over a decade between 1994 and 2005
Overall, Although a large number of residents visit the City Centre in a car with a gradual increase in the number of non-residents, this waved and decreased with the introduction of parking meters and traffic in the region.
Looking at the details, natives visiting the City Centre were the highest between 1996 and 1999, the figures slightly fluctuating between 9000 and 10,000 visitors. Whereas for non-natives show a substantial increase starting from about 5000 in 1996 rising to just below 8000 in 1999.
However, after the implication of parking meters, the former dropped drastically to about 4500 and varied up to 5000, the latter remained nearly unchanged.
On the other hand, the data for both plunged, as increased traffic due to the closure of Wastegate Street and Park Lane. Accounting the lowest of both categories between 3000 and 5000 from the years 2003 to 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ween 1994 and 2005 Overall, Although a large number of residents visit the City Centre in a ca...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ating between 9000 and 10,000 visitors. Whereas for non-natives show a substantial incr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, whereas, as for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07185628743 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62413492778 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2142724092 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196553998682 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704177304554 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115398178108 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10099642562 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108934405804 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.