In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
In this modern era, overpopulation and increasing numbers of personal vehicles are a problem for governments to find solutions. The higher tax system for car owners is one of them. Let’s consider both pros and cons of that method.
On the one hand, imposing high tax on personal car owners has some benefits for the environment. It’s will encourage people to use public transport. As a result, it changes their means of transportation and decreases air pollution. Besides that, the money collected could improve and maintain public transit. For instance, in Singapore, their government strictly implemented a blue badge card as a form of tax for private vehicles to pass to their major cities such as Changi, Sentosa and China Town. As a result, more government trains and inter-city buses were built and used by most of Singaporeans.
On the other hand. Increasing the tax on personal cars has many drawbacks. Many people live in areas which are not covered by public transportation, such as those who lived in rural areas or countryside. Thus, the tax will increase the financial burden for car owners. These people need private cars and if the tax raised, it will affect life of them. Furthermore, the taxes could create gigantic risks for automotive industry. The drop in the sales of cars will provoke the closings of productions and shops, which means workforce reductions and job losses.
In conclusion, I think that imposition of the tax on car owners is not the only solution to problems on the road. I believe imposing high tax on cars have more drawbacks than benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97744360902 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7971945921 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0823758076 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5555555556 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275696482473 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831790957306 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534440239286 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165825583093 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437422988932 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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