What are benefits and drawbacks of video game
In the modern world, video game is a topic of public interest and concern. But as with so many things in life, there are good parts and there are bad parts in video games.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Obviously, users or players can escape the stressful and unhappiness in real life and transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. As a result, they no longer suffer stress and pressure after a hard-working and studying period of time. Video game is place where they can easily put their mind at ease after a long hard-working period. Moreover, Video games help encourage critical and logical thinking, improve motor skills and reaction skills and promote skills like leadership or team building. Video games can also be an effective learning tool, gamer can be exposed to new languages and develop reading-read instruction and interact with other games all over the world
On the other hand, video games have so many disadvantages. Firstly, Video games are addictive, It have many targets and bonuses that motivate players to break the record. That is the reason why gamers spend a lot of time in front of the screen. Secondly, Video games also cause health problems in gamers like eye-related diseases and obesity
Because they do not exercise every day. For example, they often only eat junk foods while playing. Besides that, Lack of motivation lead to muscle pain as well. Furthermore, People who find themselves playing hours upon hours of video games may find themselves losing touch with the relationships they’ve built with other people.
In conclusion, Video games have become a part of all daily life. there are both advantages and disadvantages of video games but It depends on the way people use it and their purpose in playing video games
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also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 965.302439024 161% => OK
No of words: 310.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56255758038 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 283.868780488 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.104261888746 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838211538288 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
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Essay readability:
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flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
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dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
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What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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