People Participate in IELTS Program in 6 English Courses in Pare, 2016
The number of students who attending course in six different academy in Pare (ge, es, test, elfast, webster, warung ielts) in 2016 is depicted by the graph. Regarding the ielts reading and listening programs, es had the highest number of class participants. followed by test and elfast. Meanwhile, webster and warung ielts academy were on the bottom of the list with students number 144 and 155. moving to writing task 1 program, there was a slight different order of the list, which was ranked first es (157) and ge on second place (155). Subsequrntly, warung ielts and webster were in two last place with 150 and 138 student each. Furthermore, on writing task 2 program, webster ranked first with 147 participants and followed by three difference schools, - warung ielts, es and elfast- at the same number (146). on contrary, ge and es had the lowest number of participant among the list presented (145 students). Despite the variation on the number in each program, it is clear that ge and es were two courses which had the highest number of participant in three programs (reading, listening and writing task 1). Moreover, webster had the biggest number on writing task 2 program.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'academy' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'academies'.
Suggestion: academies
...s who attending course in six different academy in Pare ge, es, test, elfast, webster, ...
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Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Followed
...e highest number of class participants. followed by test and elfast. Meanwhile, webster ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moving
... list with students number 144 and 155. moving to writing task 1 program, there was a ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 614, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...were in two last place with 150 and 138 student each. Furthermore, on writing task 2 pr...
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Line 1, column 659, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'program' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...nt each. Furthermore, on writing task 2 program, webster ranked first with 147 particip...
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Line 1, column 802, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ielts, es and elfast- at the same number 146. on contrary, ge and es had the lowe...
^^
Line 1, column 809, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...es and elfast- at the same number 146. on contrary, ge and es had the lowest numb...
^^
Line 1, column 1166, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'program' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...ad the biggest number on writing task 2 program.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.855 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58800212636 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9837728233 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18408170324 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772817886823 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569244581255 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18408170324 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.