The diagram illustrates basic components of a hot balloon and its operating mechanism.
Overall, the process to run a hot balloon has two major stages, beginning with burning a mixture of propane and air in order to make hot air up and ending as it is lifted by the fact of being lighter than surrounding air.
The process commences when propane provided from cylinders is burn with the air at the burner’s position. Following this, burning the mixture of propane and air produces flame so that they completely take up the interior space of the envelope. In the next step, the high temparature makes the hot air inside the balloon lighter than cool air outside, so the whole hot balloon is elevated.
The process concludes after the balloon is blown to a certain volume, and the hot air then is released through a self-sealing flap called parachute valve, which just allows a controlled amount of air to exit.
- More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas Do you think it is a negative or positive development 89
- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas, while others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own styles. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- The charts show the percentage of peple working in different sectors in Towns A and B in two years 1960 and 2010 67
- At schools students should only be taught academic knowledge to pass the exams and skills such as cookery dressmaking and woodwork should be learned from family and friends To what exteny do you agree or disagree 89
- The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Towns A and B in two years 1960 and 2010 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of being lighter than surrounding air. The process commences when propane provi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80379746835 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61612988118 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2502115055 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105285641438 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607750944425 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481120098429 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772991341616 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165931925954 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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