The pie chart below show the area and current population of the seven continent as a percentage of the total. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The first pie chart illustrates the percentage of land area of seven continents with respect of the whole world. The second pie chart provides the amount of population in these areas.
As it is obvious, in both diagrams, the Asia has the highest percentage among all of them. After that, Africa has the maximum land area and population.
From the first chart, 30 per cent of the area belongs to Asia. While, Africa sits on the second place with 20 per cent. Northern America has 16 percent of the region. Meanwhile, the southern part of America has the 12 per cent of the total amount. Antarctica, Oceania and Europe have approximately the same percentage 9, 7 and 6 respectively.
Asian includes over half of the whole population in the world means 61 per cent. Whilst, African and European relatively have the same population 13 and 12 respectively. Northern and southern of America involve 8 and 5.5 percent of the total crowd, respectively. While, Oceania has just only 0.5 percent of the whole population, Antarctica has not any population among these areas.
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what way has technology affected the type of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development? 78
- In many countries school have severe problem with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solution can you suggest? 78
- The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown 87
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?What other measures do you think might be effective? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...0 per cent of the area belongs to Asia. While, Africa sits on the second place with 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91712707182 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73260137663 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6119400107 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4615384615 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158929121328 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572920868187 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585085009277 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109938492446 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822594580182 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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