the pie chart below show the percentage of good transported by five different means within a particular country
The pie charts describe percentages of modes of transport of good in western and eastern region of a country. the first chart shows of the information of it in eastern and western in the bellow. each chart has six categories, road, rail, river/canal, pipeline, and the last air.
The chart show if road is the most useful good transport and air as the rare used in both region.
The percentage using road to move goods is 60% in eastern and 35% in western region, this the biggest different among these charts. For pipeline in western 15% more useful than eastern but for rail and air just 5% higher. by contrast river/canal is similar in all region.
finally from these chart we know if road is generally mode transport in this country, and for other mode is not too different for all region
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.06875 0.116061578633 59% => OK
Adjectives: 0.15 0.0759168565197 198% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0375 0.0366838410393 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0125 0.0131127313244 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1625 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0125 0.0379272487307 33% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.44507204517 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00625 0.0210936926555 30% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11875 0.0948980150116 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 802.0 1161.00487805 69% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.9 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64788732394 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281690140845 0.337110787985 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246478873239 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12676056338 0.171178102325 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0915492957746 0.112407865282 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44507204517 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 48.1725696382 49.3433353143 98% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2187320608 42.9750493124 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 135.714022679 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => OK
Readability: 42.3978873239 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 3.78947368421 2.94281807926 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274341050948 0.418131533498 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.198451038535 0.181151798455 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.140653643473 0.0850326197045 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.70762499916 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.213700557357 0.157042692854 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143052809361 0.228904883108 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998528783919 0.108899403657 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315246065841 0.367819155151 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0287292768838 0.0812612215331 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184386899781 0.316326947829 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100622931901 0.0921553760075 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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