The four provided pie charts unfold a statistical comparison in how electricity was generated in Germany and France during the year of 2009, with its unit measured in billion kWh. Overall, it is obvious that both countries depended on either conventional thermal energy or nuclear energy to generate electricity.
In detail, Germany, whose total output was 560 billion kWh, depended heavily on conventional thermal energy, which accounted for 59.6% of all electricity generated. This figure was almost six times the amount of the conventional thermal energy produced in France. In contrast to Germany, the total output was lower in France, generating 510 billion kWh. However, the bulk of electricity in France came from nuclear power, which constituted over three-quarters of all electricity while only 23% of nuclear energy was produced in Germany.
Compared with conventional thermal and nuclear energy, renewables made up a small proportion for both countries, ranging from 13.7% to 17.4% of the total electricity generation. To begin with, most of the renewables in Germany consisted of biomass and wind, accounting for 76.2% combined. The total percentage of wind and biomass was far higher than that of hydroelectricity and solar energy with their figures standing at 17.7% and 6.1% respectively. However, the way in which people produced renewable energy was diametrically opposed in France, where hydroelectricity made up over four-fifths of all renewables. On the other hand, biomass, wind and solar energy only constituted the remaining 20%. Nevertheless, neither countries used geothermal energy.
- agree or disagree Large cities should ban cars from the city center 93
- Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every way Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop 95
- Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs. therefore, it is logical to share household task evenly between man and woman. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. 84
- With the increasing demand for energy sources such as oil and gas should people be looking for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...year of 2009, with its unit measured in billion kWh. Overall, it is obvious that both c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57551020408 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07218717325 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7815733103 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142708694271 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538061172651 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574181207645 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114941078261 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528465793156 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.