A generation gap between the older and younger is an inevitable social phenomenon. People living in particular era firmly believe distinct belief and concept as opposed to people of other times. These conflicts arise among different age groups. Unfortunately, this is also a typical situation for my generation.
The first divide between my parents and I can be exemplified in our different attitude for food. I always regard a meal as a kind of entertainment. Especially if I am not lack of money, I will order a sumptuous dinner on weekends. In contrast, my parents attach a great importance to every meal, and it seems as precious as gold for them. For example, sometimes there is some leftover food on the table, and I want to throw it away, because they are unhealthy. However, my parents do not approve of my action, and criticize me that it is extremely wasteful, no matter how scientific and reasonable my suggestion is.
Another generation conflict can be seen in how to plan future. I have a great passion for being a professional e-sport player, because it can allow me to play computer games and earn money at same time. By comparison, my parents assert that only stable and traditional jobs are top priority, such as officers and scientists. Therefore, my elder will argue with me about this controversial problem as long as we talk about my future. They stubbornly hold that e-sport is listless on the job and keeps making dumb mistakes. Thereby, this argument never seems to be settled, and this usually results in endless disputes and anxiety.
In conclusion, there are two main problems caused by generation gap haunt me continually. One of them is notion of diet, and other one is perception of future.
- Some countries achieve international sports by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use Do you think this is positive or negative development 84
- Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news While others believe that more effective way is through other media Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face it is a positive or a negative development 95
- The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles. 78
- agree or disagree Large cities should ban cars from the city center 93
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86394557823 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87068381783 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.501895107 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131294177268 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365779986417 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452271628161 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742672721989 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382198269928 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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