The pie charts below give information about the household expenditure of an average US family in different years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the pie charts revealing the number of household payments of the mean US families throughout the period of 34 years from 1970 to 2004.
Overall, it can be seen that childcare receives the lowest expenditure of the total group in the initial year, while people tend to spend on mortgage in the next 34 years.
In the 1970s, the ratio of the mortgage was highest among others, peaking at 26 percent, however, the percentages of food and clothing were little lower, standing at 25 and 22 percent respectively. There was a similar percentage of household expenses witnessed in transport and entertainment categories, which is 13 percent. Following this parallel trend, childcare accounted for only 1 percent which was a smaller number in comparison with other areas.
Moving on the second chart, there was approximately a three fold increase in the number of people spending money on mortgages, reaching a highest point of 50 percent. Despite the increase of mortgage, almost 12 percent of food was spent on household expenditures, compared to about 5 percent of transport and only 10 percent of clothing. In stark contrast, entertainment witnessed a leveling out during the surveyed period, which remained stable at 13 percent. Childcare uplifted significantly by 9 percent to 10 percent in the eventual years.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the pie charts revealing the number of ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... period of 34 years from 1970 to 2004. Overall, it can be seen that childcare r...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pend on mortgage in the next 34 years. In the 1970s, the ratio of the mortgage ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number in comparison with other areas. Moving on the second chart, there was ap...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e spending money on mortgages, reaching a highest point of 50 percent. Despite th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to 10 percent in the eventual years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19069767442 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93661173468 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.651167903 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0774864719328 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372034762934 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494316078821 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670688274668 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594031192563 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the pie charts revealing the number of ...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... period of 34 years from 1970 to 2004. Overall, it can be seen that childcare r...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pend on mortgage in the next 34 years. In the 1970s, the ratio of the mortgage ...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...number in comparison with other areas. Moving on the second chart, there was ap...
^^^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e spending money on mortgages, reaching a highest point of 50 percent. Despite th...
^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to 10 percent in the eventual years.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19069767442 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93661173468 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.651167903 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0774864719328 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372034762934 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494316078821 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670688274668 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594031192563 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.